For a long time, I have been walking around rather blindly, not seeing, not receiving, not feeling Jade's sense of wonder with the world at all. Last week I decided that beginning August 1, 2010, I would wake up and try to write responses to Jade's 2009 poems - one each day in August. She is much more proficient than I am in all regards - vision, voice, presence. Still, I plan to try to emulate her. I will try to post her poems and one in response. Sadly, I am already behind. But one poem for two days is a start . . .
Here is Jade's August 1st, 2009 poem:
SATURDAY 1st
- Jade DeFehr
Someone once taught
me how
to read to the roses,
or any deserving flower.
Alice in Wonderland proves
they can hear and taste and analyze
the words
tumbling out of
my mouth.
One day I might
even come across a flower
of "The Golden Afternoon"
herself.
I'd sit next to her
all day
to talk
about poetry
and the Queen of Hearts
and such.
I really would learn
a lot of things
from the flowers.
Lisa Siemens
At fourteen, she decides to write
a poem each day and then
proceeds to do so.
Nothing stops her. Nothing
is undeserving of her attention, each day
an open invitation to small celebrations.
For the flowers, she writes – the roses,
the hollyhocks, the fields of blooming
clover; for the green doors
of summer, the lost and found
stars in the sky, the choirs
that sing in her head,
the crickets, the sun, the solace
of one lonely beetle
climbing his own little mountain,
again and again. For all of us, she writes
and writes and then,
when summer is over,
and fall creeping in, she wraps them all up
like a gift, ties them together
with words and leaves them behind
in the doorways of the lucky unsuspecting few.